Shadows In The Light

SITL (Shadows in the Light) has a complex story. It is about 2 packs, intent on destroying one another. The wolves in each pack are trained from an early age to carry messages, fight and things of that nature.
 
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Age : 23
Location : Finding Where I Belong
Registration date : 2008-07-15

PostSubject: Katasha-Paw   Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:47 pm

Name:Katasha-Paw
Age:2-3
Appearance:Dark Brown Hair.Carmel ears,muzzle,and tail.Black front and back paws.Grey stomach
Personality:kind,friendly,mysterious
Markings:none except hole in ear
Pack: loner
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Registration date : 2008-04-15

PostSubject: Re: Katasha-Paw   Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:21 am

Okay. First things first. I stated that the personality and appearance had to be AT LEAST a paragraph long, each. And wolves don't have 'hair'. They have fur. If they're a loner, they wouldn't have 'paw' on her name because she's not part of a pack. And even if she was, you'd have to change the first part of the name, too. It's supposed to describe something about them. For example, Firepaw was named that because his fur is the color of fire. Squirrelkit was named that because her tail was fluffy like a squirrels.

Please fix the things I stated, and I will review your application again.

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