Shadows In The Light

SITL (Shadows in the Light) has a complex story. It is about 2 packs, intent on destroying one another. The wolves in each pack are trained from an early age to carry messages, fight and things of that nature.
 
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Silvermoon

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PostSubject: Diesel Hawkseye   Mon Jul 28, 2008 2:23 am

Name:Diesel
Age:3
RP Experience:4 months

RP Example:Diesl padded through the forest in seach of food. He was hungry and all of his senses were on high alert, his ears were pearked up listening for the sounds of any prey that was close by. he would stop every so often to scent the air, soon his efforts paid off. he found the scent of a rabbit, the trail was still fresh and he could tell that it was still close by. he licked his lips as he followed the scent, he could already taste the rabbit. he soon spotted the rabbit in the distance.

Diesel needed to get closer to to the rabbit so he would be able to catch before it dived into it's rabbit's hole. He lowred his body to the ground and stalked the rabbit, slowly approching it with out making a sound. when he was closed enough he sprinted towards the rabbit. The rabbit saw him and tried to ran off but Diesel quickly closed the distance between them and killed the hare with a swift bite to the neck. He took his kill under the cool shade of a tree and ate his prize. when he was finished eating he decided to rest befor moving on.
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PostSubject: Re: Diesel Hawkseye   Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:10 pm

Not bad, not bad. WW, what do you think?

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PostSubject: Re: Diesel Hawkseye   Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:12 pm

Well, I personally think it's not bad. If it had to go to me, I would accept it. But this is a try out for an Alpha, therefor I believe you should decide upon that.

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PostSubject: Re: Diesel Hawkseye   Tue Jul 29, 2008 12:56 pm

Hmmm...Very good, but the vocab seems to be a bit short at hand. You use too many of the same words, but accepted anyways ^^ If you would like, I could be your role-playing coach =3 Just PM me

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PostSubject: Re: Diesel Hawkseye   Tue Jul 29, 2008 9:15 pm

ok thx LP i'll take you up on that offer
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